Saturday, October 23, 2010

Hanging By a Moment - P7

Hiiiiii Everyone :D

I know I haven't posted in a long time but I travelled and I've been busy with L bullying me :( she makes me cook, clean and do laundry :P YES YOU DO :P I can see your reaction all the way from here :P

Anywhoo .. I promised DDCanada's sister that this post will be dedicated to her and so it is with the rest of my blog readers and followers ;)

I hope you like it :)

Love,
EB

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It was already 6 in the evening. Nayla was sitting in her room staring at herself in the mirror .. She could hear her mom ordering the maids around; Jean did you bring out the silver plates? Shesheman why are the lights off in the maylas? Salman Yumaa wainah Amir 5aleh eyeeb el 7alaweyat


Nayla got her dress out .. Pink-Shell dress .. long sleeved, 3 inches under her knee .. Her hair was almost ready, so was her make-up, Pink blusher, pink lipstick, Black eyeliner to bring out her beautiful eyes with mascara .. simple, elegant and beautiful


Nayla headed to her closet and reached to the box with her things to read the promise paper Hamad gave her .. The scent of bukhoor made its way through the door .. She closed her eyes she smiled she imagined how will today go .. Maybe with a few laughs, stories, embarrassing comments that would make her blush .. This day won’t go wrong .. will yeah she expects that lunatic to text her and threaten her but nothing will matter after today




Dalal: Haaa ela 9akeen 3yoona o mestanseen o ente5ayal

Nayla (Embarrassed): 3an el beya5a

Dalal (Hugging Nayla): Fedaitach Nayool

Nayla: Ga3da a7ati .. a5af a6ee7 wela aket 3a9eer wla ala3wez ro7i etha kalt

Dalal: tketeen wetla3wezeen o et6ee7een !! Shda3wa Nayool 3umrech 4 sneen

Nayla (Giggling): Mo hay eli 5ayfa meneh .. a5af ygol ana 5a6ebli yahel lail7een mat3arf takel








Doorbell .. Ding Dong






Nayla’s eyes widen up nervously



Dalal (Laughing): Nayool chayfa yeni !!

Nayla: Bs hawant mabi .. Goloolah bs yerja3 bait-hum

Dalal: Gomai ba6lai sha3rech o ratbeeh .. Don’t forget to put on your earings





Nayla’s hair was curled and the sides were pulled to the back splitting her hair from the middle .. She waited upstairs patiently for her mother to call her .. She would try to listen to their conversations .. All they talked about was normal general things .. She suddenly heard her name come up “Ma sha2 Allah Nayla ......” and then she couldn’t hear anything .. That was so annoying .. There was no use so she turned her tv on and switched the channel to boomerang ..




15 minutes have passed .. Her door opened .. Nayla looked to see who it was




Um AbdulRahman: Yalla 7abeebti emshi weyay ta7at 3ad mawa9eech 5alech razeena o thegeela bs ay shay b5a6rech tes2eleenah se2leeh
Nayla: Enshalla




Nayla took her first step on the stairs and tripped but managed not to fall .. She was very nervous but took a breath and walked down the stairs .. Hamad looked up to see his soon to be bride walk towards him .. he turned his head to hear his mother say “Alf el 9alat wel salam 3alaik ya 7abeeb Allah mohammed” and he automatically smirks





Nayla starts by kissing her Father’s forehead, Her uncle’s, Um Hamad was next, Sumaya, Dalal, Rawan and 7e9a Hamad’s sisters .. She reaches to Hamad .. He already stood up to greet her .. She smiled and put her head down .. Hamad bent to catch her eyes and asked her “Nayla shlonach?” She answered in a very low voice blushing not even Hamad could hear her “........” she looked around to sit but all couches were occupied except for the one next to Hamad ..




She couldn’t help inhaling his 3od scent as he fixed his ‘3etra to the back .. He was holding a maroon mesba7 in his left hand .. Something she gave him when they first fell for each other




Um Hamad: Nayla 7abeebti ge3dai laish wagfa
Nayla smiled and sat at the end of the couch trying to be as far as she can from Hamad .. Conversations were exchanged, Comments were made of how they suit each other, Hamad 7e6ha fi 3yonek .. ya 7lailha mesta7ya .. Hamad was enjoying this



Dinner was served but this time they sat at different ends of the table ..




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Sep 30, 2010  8:03:14 PM
Ya b3d 3umry .. Seb7aneh mn 5elag feech el jamal




Nayla put her phone down trying to avoid making eye contact with Hamad



7e9a (Whispering to Nayla): 7adi mestansa ena o5oi e56ebach

Nayla (Smiling): ....


7e9a: Ana kent 5ayfa ya5eth hatheech eli ykalemha .. Makent a7ebha

Nayla (shocked): eli ykalemha?

7e9a: Eee kanat tete9el feeni wa7da esemha Sara tgoli enha 7abeebat o5oi o tgoli meta tabeeh yete9el feeha


Nayla (pretending to be ok): Aha

7e9a: bs hal kalam mn fatra .. Gabel 4 wela 5 shhor ta8reeban




Nayla pushed her plate forward




7e9a: Nayla shfeech? Laykon ze3altay?

Nayla: La 7abeebti bs sheba3t

7e9a: tara mo 8a9dy bs agolach I’m glad it was you



Salman: 5aloona nag3ed bara3 tara el jaw wayed 7elow



Um AbdulRahman: La wayed 7ar



Bu Hamad: La 5aloona nag3ed bara3 o en5ali Hamad o Nayla yetmashon o ysolfon 3ala ra7at-hum o fi nafs el wagt bwejoodna



Bu AbdulRahman: Yalla tewakalna




The maids set the chairs and tables and prepared chai 7aleeb to drink .. Hamad got up and asked Nayla to come and join him for a walk




First it was awkward .. They were both quiet and walking next to each other .. Hamad had both his hands at the back and turned to look at Nayla




Hamad: Haa 5a6eebty .. Meta tabeen el melcha

Nayla: Hamad e7na lazem entekalam gabel kel shay

Hamad: Ee 2amray .. shenow f5a6rech?


Nayla: Mn Sara?

Hamad: Ay sara?

Nayla: Hamad ! Sara !! Eli ent t7ebha ..

Hamad: Ana a7eb Nayla o ma3arf mn Sara a9lan

Nayla: Gabel 3 shhor ent kent 6ale3 weyaha o eta9lat feeni 3shan tgoli

Hamad: Wallah el3a’9eem mo 3aref enty 3n shenow yalsa tetkalemain

Nayla: b3d betachtheb 3ali?

Hamad: Enty laish shakaka o mat9adgeeni !!


Nayla (Gettin her phone out): Choof el msgat hathi .. Kel yem3a gabel aroo7 bait yadi eyeeni tahdeed mnha 3shan ab3ed 3anek


Hamad (Confused): Shenow? Mn Hathi? 3a6eeni telephonech




He read txt after txt and Nayla could see his eyes filled with flame and anger .. He got his phone out and saved the number in his phone




Nayla: Hamad ent mat3arfha?

Hamad: La ma3arfha bs ana baraweeha shlon talzem 7dodha

Nayla: Hamad .. 7e9a galatli ena Sara kanat tete9el feeha 3ala asas enha 7abeebtek

Hamad: 7e9a kanat tgoli “sara tabeek” bs 3abali tet’3ashmar o et5ef damha!!

Nayla: Mn 9ijek wala ga3ed taster 3ala ro7ek?

Hamad: Nayla latnarfezeeni tara wa9el 7adi !! Gelt lach ana hal bnaya ma3arfha








Doorbell .. Ding Dong





Jean: Madam .. Sir Bader and Sir Yousif are here



Um AbdulRahman: Bu AbdulRahman o5ok yay 3endena .. choofah 3asa ma shar



Bu AbdulRahman: Ya halla eb o5oi tefa’9al Bu Bader 7ayak

Bu Bader: Allah y7ayeek Jassim

Bader (Kissing his uncle’s forehead): Halla 3ami

Bu Bader: E7na ya 5ooi yayeenak eb maw’9oo3

Bu AbdulRahman: Tamerni yousif

Bu Bader: Sema3na ena Nayla 5e6abha weld 5alha .. Shlon twafeg o ehya leha weld 3am?

12 comments:

  1. OMG LIES!!! You do your own laundry -.- unless your expecting me to do it?! ^-

    You guys should actually be thanking me as I bullied her into writing this!!! Yes, I did and it wasn't an easy job but YAY!! She finally posted!

    so YOUR WELCOME!

    I love it...... and i loved the big hang in the end!!! :)
    Hmmmm.... I wonder whats next!

    xxx Love you

    p.s again i do not bully her to cook, clean, or do laundry but to POST!!!

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  2. whaattttt?
    laaa:( cliffhanger?:'(
    next post please! please,please please! or I'll be the one bulling you to post;p

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  3. OMG

    ok first off, both EB and L bully me!! yah the truth is coming out! i dont know ho i survived last year :p hahahaha i love you guys :P <3

    back to the post
    OMG OMG OMG OMG i loves it!!!
    first off that sara is a weirdo unless hamad is lying then he is a jerk so confusing

    ooo min bader?????? he suddenly showed up!
    wat is this the battle of the cousins affection? :P hahahha
    I LOVE THIS!!!! AND PLEASE POST SOOON!
    mwah your the best
    and L* your the best too
    and I am the bestest :P jk jk

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  4. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

    Through out the whole post this is how i was ^^^^^

    I loved every bit of it 7ada 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb , 7AMAD <3 *Love-Stuck* ;p

    the only thing i didn't like was that cliff hanger at the end of the post .... As you know i hate waiting :$ ;p PLEASE POST SOON

    Lovely post as always luv
    Love Ya
    Qb*

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  5. *L: hahahaha yes ask people to thank you for bullying me :P Enshalla I wont let you hang for long .. And enshalla I'll cook now stop shouting :P


    Blue Lilies: hahahaha walla the only thing that was holding me back was I didn't know what Nayla should be wearing :P I'll post soon enshallah I won't let you hang for long


    July: 7aram 3alaich it wasn't me it was L :P I was the innocent little thing on the side scared as much as u (a) the battle of cousins affection hahaha maybe :P We'll see .. I agree You're the bestest :*


    Queen B: I'm glad you liked it :D :D Maybe Bader is as charming as Hamad is .. Enshalla I won't let you hang wayed .. We'll see how my assessment goes and as soon as I'm done I'll post enshallah :D O enty eli dayem your comment ykoon Lovely :*

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  6. :o
    I swear i was minding my own business and i see this... I was not shouting or even talking to you -.- what lunch? its already 6!
    Ba3ad July will back me up... awena scared of me -.-!
    And btw ppl i told her to post soon and we were discussing her next post and shes like uhh maybe next weekend!
    And i said SOONER!!

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  7. awwwww!! thats soo cuute :$ thnx soo much :D i really apperciate it ... and i love your storyy a loot! and the best part is that he is called Hamad (H) hehe

    thnx again.. :)

    tc

    ...
    DD Canada's SISTER :P

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  8. DDCanada's Sister: Tawah manawar el blog :D walla matga9reen I'm just happy that you're following me .. I love the name Hamad wayed too if I don't marry one I'll give birth to one enshalla :P

    Afa 3alaich don't thank me and salmai 3ala your sister :P

    Sayry 3alaina and always keep in touch :*

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  9. nawar bwjoodich :* omg i said the same thing!! bas if its a baby, then a chubby one (L) wayed cute :P

    i actually was following u first then i gave the link to my sis haha im the addict one bas now she is too :P

    alla yewafigich ow y36eech el 3afyah :D

    ...
    DD Canada's SISTER :)

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  10. DDCanada's Sister: Thats very sweet of you walla it means a lot to me to see comments from you and my other followers .. specially that I never tried writing before .. at least not a story XP

    Thnx for commenting 7abeebti your just too nice :*

    *Hugz*

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  11. OMG!!!! SOOO adorable!!! I can't wait!!! And I'm so proud of myself, my ability to read Aranglish is getting really good thanks to you.

    In the first few posts, I would go through a sentence and have NO IDEA how to read it so it would take me like 30 mins to read each post LOL!!! I guess that just shows you my dedication to reading your wonderful writing <3 Miss you soo much!!

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  12. Rifa: LooooL I would write in English but I personally Love Arabic :P It gives more meaning to words .. But if you didn't understand whats going on let me know .. I'll be glad to teach you new words lol maybe bahraini ones <3 I don't want you to struggle while reading the story .. I feel bad .. I'll add a little bit more of English in their conversations :) I miss you more I wish you could come to the UK .. Try to come the weekend your lil sis comes and you two can stay as long as you want :*

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