Saturday, August 28, 2010

Hanging By a Moment - P4

Dedicated to L and all of My followers :*


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Nayla: Hathi wa7ed mn el murasha7een 7g our new advertisement .. El'9aher el9oora 6a7at mn el'9arf

Dalal: Jameel mashallah 3alaih

Nayla: Eee bs 3endena katha wa7ed ‘3airah .. Yabooni a5tar mnhum o enkalmeh sboo3 elyay

Dalal: 3ad 7asafa 3alaih model :P 7alateh brazantah mo 6ag elwayh

Nayla (Laughing): Shakelna me5tareenah  .. Elmohem ana aroo7 atesaba7 o anam

Dalal: o el movie?

Nayla: La mali 5elg ana a3arf thog Salman kela thab7 o dam o loo3at chabd

Dalal: Enzain kaifech

Dalal gave Nayla a huge kiss on her cheek and left her room

Nayla set herself ready to sleep. She had a habit of opening her curtain just a bit to look at the moon before she closes her eyes but today was too cloudy, the moon was nowhere to be seen. She closed her eyes remembering Hamad and what he said at her grandmother’s house. She thought to herself..  What does he want from me? I don’t want him anymore. It was a mistake falling for him.

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Nayla was in a dark room. She can hear him calling for her from far. She ran everywhere looking for him. She suddenly saw him. She ran towards him. She hugged him and he disappeared. She looked to her right. There he was, standing and calling for her again. She ran even faster this time. She dropped to her knees crying. But something seemed to pull him away. It looked like he was a knight at a chess game. Something was moving him far away from her. She tried to shout and call him but she had no voice. She then saw herself falling in a dark hole and that’s when she woke up.

Nayla tried to catch her breath. She was sweating all over. She got up to wash her face. It was around 5 in the morning. She prayed fajer and as she finished she saw her blackberry blinking.

+9733*******
Sep 29, 2010  3:42:18 AM
Nayla I miss you .. Ly meta y3ni?

Nayla ignored his text message and got ready to go to work. She put on an orange chiffon top with black pants, Golden Belt, and a golden Dior watch. She put on her bronze-sh makeup and a black shaila. She was ready to join her family for breakfast and leave for work.


Around 4 PM Nayla was leaving the building to get to her car. She had a long hectic day at work. She saw Hamad waiting for her.

Hamad: Nayla abi a7acheech

Nayla (walking away): O ana mabi a7acheek

Hamad: Mo bkaifech

He held her shoulder and turned her to face him.

Nayla (in an angry voice): Hedni malak 7ag 3ali

Hamad: Nayla 5ala9 3ad.. Makan feena shay !! sheli ‘3ayaar?

Nayla: Kel shay te’3ayar .. Ana mabeek

Hamad: Nayool please fehmeeni .. Kent mkalmach el3a9er o kena 3adeyeen .. Kalamtach belail o gelteeli latred tete9el feeni !! Shfeech? Ana shsawait? Goleeli tara teyanant abi a3arf shelsalfa !! Enty shayfa 3ali shay?

Nayla: walla 7amad eli 3ala raseh ba67a ..

Hamad (Cutting her off): Ay ba67a ay 5arabe6 Nayla latnarfezeeni .. Ana rayal etekana 6ol o 3ar’9 jedamech 3aib !!

Nayla: 5ala9 7amad gom 3ani ana mabeek o mo ‘3a9eb

Hamad (with an angry higher tone): Mo gayem ly matgoleenli shfeech .. 9arli thalath shhor ayeech o ara’9eech 3ala shay madri shenow ohwa

Nayla: La betgoom o tara methel ma et3arf terfa3 9otek tara ana b3d a3arf arfa3 9oty o alem elnas keleha 3alaik

Hamad: t5asain terfe3een 9otech jedam el reyayeel wela tara 8asam bellah Nayool

Nayla (Cutting him off): 8asam bellah shenow Hamad? Bet6egni? La ent wala 6ewayfek

Hamad (Surprised): chenha m9e5at !! Mn wain yat hal wa8a7a?

Nayla: Mn m3ashertek

Hamad (Letting go of her shoulder): Tadreen shlon Nayla .. Ana eli mabeech .. Al3an obo el7ub lo feeh mathalah

Nayla: Abrakha mn sa3a

They both got into their cars. Hamad was never this angry. He felt like someone just stabbed him and twisted the knife through his heart.

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As Nayla drove off her phone rang

Nayla: Alo

Rashid: Beeh Nayla shfeeh 9otech? 9ay7a?

Nayla: La Rashid bs t3bana shway

Rashid: Ok bs 3ayal ly fe’9aitay abeech ‘9eroori

Nayla: Enshallah ma3a elsalama

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Meanwhile Hamad made a phone call

Hamad: Halla Yuma .. Shlonach?

Um Hamad: Halla bwlaidy .. ana b5air ent shlonak?

Hamad: Yuma abeech ta56ebeenli ...

9 comments:

  1. Omg! This is getting intense by the moment and I love it! It's so realistic! Mashallaa is all I can say...I'm speechless lol :P
    Waiting for you next!

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  2. What?
    im so confused!
    this assuming he doesnt want nayla...
    and what happend... he was such a nice guy!!!
    hahahaha

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  3. waittt..wait, i am confused;s
    3adi you clarify please?
    either than that loved the post

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  4. Jewel: You're so sweet and supportive *Hugz* 7abeebti enty enshalla the next post will be dedicated to you

    *L an Blue Lilies: Why are you both confused? :P They were together and she left him .. he tried to win her back but she's not giving him a chance .. and now he took a step o I can't say more than that l2na bete7tereg 3alaikum el8e9a :P

    xxx

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  5. AHHH!!! Ok Elegant I get your explanation but I can't wait to find out why she left him!!!! And who Hamad wants to propose to!!!!!!

    My explanation of why he's not "such a nice guy" anymore is one of two things:

    1- he's just pissed and over-reacted, ya3ni just a human thing there was no violence or unnecessary insults so no harm done

    2- he's a khaleeji guy....to explain, a khaleeji guy will do ANYTHING to get you and show you his love. Within 5 mins of meeting you, he has decided that he can't live w/o you and he will write 100 poems to you, buy you jewelry, he'd even physically bend over backwards if you ask him to...anything... unfortunately, usually 5 mins after you finally give in and give him your heart, he will treat you like crap and move on to the next "love of his life." to be fair this isn't just a khaleeji thing or just a guy thing but in my experience khaleeji boys are particularly good at this. LOL!

    I guess we'll have to wait until the next part to find out if Hamad is 1 or 2.

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  6. aaaahhh OMG OMG OMG
    wat im soo confused! but its like awesome confusing :P dude i feel sorry for hamad, like maybe he dint do anythin wrong, i mean come on he dsnt even know, OR he did do so many things wrong he dint knw which one, or he thinks he can never be busted because the only other person who knows he secret is DEAD! :O
    ok lol im abit hyper, awesome post as always
    i love you, like a fat kid loves cake <3

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  7. hahahahaha I swear your comments just get better and better :P its like skills !!

    Rifa:LOL yeah guys suck but not all :P Khaleeji guys are our only option .. My dad would kill me if I come back with a british guy :P LOL

    July: Now every1 is confused? hahahaha I love you like a fat kid loves cake too <3

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  8. OMG! akrah shay when your both angry and you say hurtful things.. it hurts so much! ow 3ashan che you say stuff that you dont mean..
    bas laish ehya mataby? he cheated on her?
    more please (A) ..
    ow WAYID 3ijbatny ilstory!

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  9. Teslemeen 7abeebti

    Yeah sometimes you can't help but be angry .. But I'm totally against being rude unless you have no other choice lol

    Clarification is in post 5 ;)

    Love,
    EB

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